Freedom and Fresh Starts

The Eighth Bride at Copper Hollow · Chapter 1 of 6

Chapter 1

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Rain had been falling over Copper Hollow since before sunrise, turning the main street into a ribbon of brown mud and making the wooden buildings look darker than usual beneath the heavy Colorado sky.

Elias Thorne stood beneath the narrow roof of the train depot with his hat in one hand.

At six feet seven inches without boots, Elias did not simply stand somewhere. He occupied it.

His shoulders strained the seams of his weathered brown coat. His hands were large enough to close around a fence post, and his boots looked almost absurd beside the neat shoes of the traveling salesman waiting twenty feet away.

Elias knew exactly what people saw when they looked at him.

He had known since he was fourteen.

A giant.

A brute.

A man who ought to be dangerous simply because God had made too much of him.

Copper Hollow had added another name.

The Devil.

The name had started as a joke in the saloon years ago and survived long after anyone remembered who had said it first.

Yet Elias rarely drank. He had never started a bar fight. He paid his bills on time, helped neighbors repair fences after storms, and once spent two freezing nights searching the mountains for a miner's missing son.

None of it mattered as much as his size.

And then there were the rumors.

Those were worse.

Men invented them because men were cruel when bored, and frightened women repeated them because fear made foolish stories sound believable.

Elias had learned not to argue.

A denial only made people laugh harder.

That morning, nearly half of Copper Hollow seemed determined to witness what everyone assumed would become his eighth humiliation.

People pretended to conduct business across the street.

Mr. Turner's mercantile suddenly had six customers standing on its porch.

Three ranch hands lingered beside the hitching rail without horses.

Two women watched through the bakery window.

Elias noticed every one of them.

He said nothing.

He had already survived seven failures.

Surely he could survive one more.

The first woman who had agreed to marry him had lasted five days at the ranch.

Her name was Anne.

On the sixth morning Elias found a note beside the stove.

I'm sorry. I cannot do this.

He never saw her again.

The second bride disappeared before sunrise after spending most of the previous evening asking questions about whether Elias locked his bedroom door.

He did.

From the inside.

For her comfort.

It had not mattered.

The third woman had been Margaret.

Margaret was different.

For twenty-nine days, she had made him believe things might change.

She baked bread on Tuesdays.

She planted lavender beneath his bedroom window.

Once, while they washed dishes together, her shoulder brushed his arm and she did not immediately move away.

That small moment had kept Elias awake half the night.

He had imagined children.

Christmas mornings.

A woman's shawl hanging beside his coat.

Someone saying his name not because they needed a horse shoed or a wagon lifted but because they were glad he had come home.

On the thirtieth morning, Margaret borrowed his mule.

She never returned.

The fourth woman invented a dying mother in Missouri.

The fifth locked herself inside the guest bedroom whenever Elias entered the house.

The sixth remained one night despite the fact Elias slept in the barn.

The seventh never even climbed out of the wagon.

“Take me away from him,” she had told the driver.

Elias had stood beside his ranch gate holding wildflowers.

The wagon turned around.

He remembered watching the flowers in his hand while rain began falling around him.

After that, he had stopped looking for a wife.

Or tried to.

But winter had a way of exposing loneliness.

During summer, there was always work.

Cattle.

Fences.

Hay.

Repairs.

Horses.

There was no time to notice the silence.

Then December came.

Snow buried the pastures.

Darkness fell before supper.

And Elias sat beside his stove listening to the old house settle around him.

Every unused bedroom upstairs seemed to accuse him.

Every empty chair seemed to wait for someone.

He did not simply want a wife.

He wanted a family.

Someone to argue with about whether the biscuits had burned.

Someone to laugh when he came indoors with snow in his beard.

Someday, perhaps, children whose little boots would sit beside his enormous ones near the stove.

So when a St. Louis matchmaker wrote him unexpectedly four months earlier, Elias had kept the letter for three days before answering.

He had been painfully honest.

He told her his height.

He described the isolated ranch.

He warned her about Copper Hollow's winters.

He explained that people sometimes found him intimidating.

And he promised any woman who came west that she would have her own bedroom for as long as she wanted it.

No pressure.

No expectations.

No claim on her affection merely because she had traveled there.

Six weeks later another letter arrived.

A respectable widow had accepted.

Her name was Clara Vance.

Elias had nearly burned the letter.

Instead, he had read it every night for a week.

Now her train was arriving.

The whistle echoed between the mountains.

Conversations across the street stopped.

Elias placed his hat on his head, then immediately removed it again because his hands needed something to do.

The locomotive emerged through the rain, black iron shining under the gray sky.

Steam rolled across the platform.

Brakes screamed.

The train stopped.

Passengers began descending.

A businessman carrying two leather cases.

A mother with a sleepy boy.

Two miners.

An elderly couple.

A soldier.

Elias searched every face.

Then came a woman's boot.

Worn brown leather.

A dark blue skirt followed.

The woman descended carefully.

She was smaller than Elias had expected, though nearly everyone seemed small beside him.

She appeared somewhere in her late thirties, perhaps early forties.

Brown hair streaked with the first threads of silver was pinned beneath a simple dark bonnet. Her coat was practical rather than fashionable. Her face was attractive in a quiet way that did not demand attention.

A faint scar curved near her temple.

She carried a carpetbag in one hand.

Pressed against her ribs with the other was a narrow wooden case.

The case was perhaps two feet long, made from dark polished wood, with reinforced corners and a brass clasp.

Clara Vance.

Elias knew immediately.

He swallowed.

The train started moving again.

Steam drifted between them.

Clara turned.

Their eyes met.

Elias felt the old dread enter his stomach.

Here it comes.

He had seen the same sequence seven times.

First a woman noticed his height.

Then the shoulders.

Then the hands.

Then the rumors she had heard returned to her mind.

Fear followed.

Clara's gaze moved slowly from his boots upward.

Past his legs.

His chest.

His shoulders.

His face.

Across the street, somebody chuckled.

Elias heard another man whisper, “Give her ten seconds.”

Clara kept staring.

Elias prepared himself.

He had already arranged for a room at the Copper Hollow Hotel in case she refused him. He would pay for her return ticket too.

No humiliation required.

No questions.

She owed him nothing.

But something unexpected happened.

Clara's shoulders dropped.

Her grip on the carpetbag relaxed.

A breath escaped her.

And relief—unmistakable relief—passed across her face.

She smiled.

Not politely.

Not because she was trying to spare his feelings.

It was the trembling smile of a woman discovering that something she desperately hoped for had actually happened.

“Mr. Elias Thorne?”

Her voice was quiet.

“Yes, ma'am.”

“My name is Clara Vance.”

“I figured.”

He immediately regretted how foolish that sounded.

Clara's smile widened slightly.

Elias gestured toward her carpetbag.

“May I?”

She tightened her grip.

“No.”

Elias stepped back at once.

“All right.”

A pause.

Then he added, “I'm sure you're perfectly capable of carrying it.”

Something flickered in her expression.

Appreciation, perhaps.

But she kept the wooden case closer than the bag.

Rain splashed through the edge of the depot roof.

Elias glanced toward the people staring from the street.

“I apologize for the audience.”

Clara followed his gaze.

“Are they always this interested in trains?”

“No, ma'am.”

“You?”

He sighed.

“Unfortunately.”

That almost made her laugh.

Then Clara looked at him again.

Really looked.

Her gaze settled on his hands.

Then his shoulders.

Then his face.

The same strange relief returned.

“Thank God,” she whispered.

Elias frowned.

“For what?”

Clara stepped half a pace closer.

Close enough that he smelled rain and lavender soap.

“They told me you were an enormous man, Mr. Thorne.”

Elias felt heat climb his neck.

“I suppose they weren't lying.”

“No.”

Her eyes moved over him again.

“They certainly weren't.”

A ranch hand across the street laughed loudly.

Elias ignored him.

But Clara's expression suddenly changed.

Her smile vanished.

Her eyes dropped toward the narrow wooden case pressed against her side.

Her fingers tightened around the handle.

Elias heard something.

A tiny metallic sound from inside.

Click.

Clara went still.

So did he.

“Mrs. Vance?”

She looked toward the street.

Then behind her toward the departing train.

Fear appeared in her eyes for the first time.

But it was not fear of Elias.

It was fear of something else.

Something she believed might have followed her to Copper Hollow.

Elias lowered his voice.

“Is there a problem?”

Clara stared up at him.

“Mr. Thorne, before we leave this station, I need to know whether something you wrote in your letter was true.”

“Which part?”

“That your ranch is seventeen miles from town.”

“Yes.”

“And the nearest house?”

“Five miles, roughly.”

“And you own the road leading into your north pasture?”

He hesitated.

“Yes.”

Her breathing changed.

She nodded slowly.

“Good.”

Elias looked toward the wooden case again.

“What exactly are you carrying?”

Clara held it tighter.

“Something that belongs to me.”

The answer clearly meant the conversation was finished.

Elias nodded.

“All right.”

That seemed to surprise her.

“You aren't going to ask again?”

“Not unless it becomes my business.”

For several seconds Clara simply stared at him.

Then something in her face softened.

A small thing.

But Elias saw it.

He picked up her carpetbag only after she finally offered it.

The case remained in her arms.

They walked toward his wagon.

As they crossed the muddy street, Elias heard a familiar voice.

“Hey, Thorne!”

Wade Mercer stood beneath the saloon awning with two friends.

Wade had been responsible for several of the uglier rumors about Elias.

He grinned at Clara.

“Ma'am, you sure you want to ride seventeen miles alone with that?”

Clara stopped.

Elias closed his eyes briefly.

He expected fear.

Or embarrassment.

Instead Clara turned.

She studied Wade.

Then Elias.

Then Wade again.

“That?” she asked.

Wade smirked.

“The giant.”

Clara's face became strangely calm.

She moved closer to Elias until her shoulder nearly touched his arm.

“I crossed twelve hundred miles to meet Mr. Thorne,” she said. “You crossed a muddy street to insult him.”

Several people nearby went silent.

Wade's grin disappeared.

Clara continued.

“That tells me considerably more about you than it does about him.”

Elias stared down at her.

Nobody had defended him in Copper Hollow for years.

Clara turned away as though nothing unusual had happened.

“Is that our wagon?”

Elias blinked.

“Yes, ma'am.”

“Then perhaps we should go home.”

Home.

The word struck him harder than it should have.

They climbed aboard.

Elias covered Clara's knees with an oilskin blanket and guided the horses away from town.

For the first few miles, neither spoke.

Rain softened to a mist.

Pine forests climbed the mountains on both sides of the road.

Clara watched everything.

Eventually she said, “You don't ask many questions.”

“I figured you'd answer what you wanted me to know.”

“And if I don't?”

“Then I suppose I'll wait.”

Clara looked at him.

“You are not what they said.”

Elias gave a humorless smile.

“You've known me forty minutes.”

“Sometimes forty minutes is enough to discover what a man isn't.”

Before Elias could reply, Clara looked over her shoulder.

The road behind them was empty.

Still, she kept watching it.

Elias noticed.

He said nothing.

An hour later they reached the high valley where Thorne Ranch sat between pine-covered slopes.

The house stood beneath cottonwoods beside a long barn.

Smoke curled from the chimney.

Clara stared.

“It is beautiful.”

Elias felt unexpectedly pleased.

“You sound surprised.”

“I've learned not to trust descriptions written by hopeful men.”

That earned a genuine laugh from him.

It was the first time Clara heard it.

She smiled.

Elias stepped down and offered his hand.

Clara accepted.

His fingers completely surrounded hers.

She did not flinch.

Instead she looked at their joined hands.

Then up at him.

Again came that strange relief.

Inside the house, Elias showed her the kitchen, parlor, pantry, and staircase.

“Your room is upstairs. First door on the right.”

“Your room?”

“End of the hall.”

“So we have separate rooms.”

“Until you decide otherwise.”

Clara stared at him.

“You truly meant that.”

“I said it.”

“Men say many things in letters.”

“I don't.”

He carried her carpetbag upstairs.

Clara carried the wooden case.

When they reached her bedroom, she entered and immediately placed the case beneath the bed.

Elias noticed.

He pretended not to.

Dinner was quiet.

Beans, ham, and cornbread Elias had prepared badly.

Clara ate without complaint.

Afterward, she helped wash the dishes.

For the first time in years, another person stood beside Elias in his kitchen.

It felt almost painfully ordinary.

He loved it.

Then someone knocked on the door.

Three hard knocks.

Clara froze.

A plate slipped from her fingers.

Elias caught it before it hit the floor.

He looked at her face.

All the color had vanished.

“Were you expecting someone?”

“No.”

Another knock.

Elias crossed the room.

Clara whispered, “Wait.”

He turned.

She stood with both hands gripping the edge of the table.

“Who knows I'm here?”

“Half the town watched you arrive.”

Her eyes closed.

Elias opened the door.

A boy of perhaps twelve stood outside holding an envelope.

“Telegram for Mrs. Vance.”

Clara made a sound behind him.

Not relief.

Something worse.

Elias accepted the envelope.

The boy rode away.

Clara did not move.

Elias held the telegram toward her.

“You don't have to open it tonight.”

She took it.

Her hands trembled.

She tore the envelope.

Read the message.

Then read it again.

“What does it say?” Elias asked gently.

Clara lifted her eyes.

And for the first time since stepping from the train, she looked truly terrified.

“He found me.”

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